I really liked your story...I enjoyed listening to the music from the Godfather haha also I put in one of my slides that I was from Sunday dinners. Great Job!
I enjoyed your story. I liked all the pictures. It is obvious that you come from a close family. I, too, come from a family of Sunday dinners. I liked the music, but it was slow. In the last slide, "would'nt" should be "wouldn't". Overall, I think you did a great job and I liked your story.
I really liked your video. I thought your pictures worked really well. I liked that you used the music from the Godfather. I thought it worked really well here. If you were to change something, I think it would be better to have all the words in the frame at the beginning of the pictures so you're not trying to read part of the sentence at first.
You portrayed your story well, Joey! The pictures were great, and the music obviously fit your heritage. I had a grandfather who was in WW2, also. The only thing I noticed is what Anita already mentioned, the "would'nt" typo on the last slide. Overall, great job!
Joey, I really enjoyed your photo story. I think that the music you used tells even more about you and your culture. My mother also has a very large garden. I agree with Jay that maybe having the words in the frame sooner would help the viewers.
I really liked your story...I enjoyed listening to the music from the Godfather haha also I put in one of my slides that I was from Sunday dinners. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your story. I liked all the pictures. It is obvious that you come from a close family. I, too, come from a family of Sunday dinners. I liked the music, but it was slow. In the last slide, "would'nt" should be "wouldn't". Overall, I think you did a great job and I liked your story.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your video. I thought your pictures worked really well. I liked that you used the music from the Godfather. I thought it worked really well here. If you were to change something, I think it would be better to have all the words in the frame at the beginning of the pictures so you're not trying to read part of the sentence at first.
ReplyDeleteYou portrayed your story well, Joey! The pictures were great, and the music obviously fit your heritage. I had a grandfather who was in WW2, also. The only thing I noticed is what Anita already mentioned, the "would'nt" typo on the last slide. Overall, great job!
ReplyDeleteJoey, I really enjoyed your photo story. I think that the music you used tells even more about you and your culture. My mother also has a very large garden. I agree with Jay that maybe having the words in the frame sooner would help the viewers.
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